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This week the Ball pitcher went from this:
... to this:
... when it was originally this:
I know there are still a lot of problems (and it's obvious I simplified it a lot) but I think the things that are right outnumber the things that are wrong.
Posted at 08:10 AM in Miscellaneous Mockery | Permalink
I agree - I like it! (and that's no bologna)
January 06, 2022 at 07:51 PM
KC - hah! Nice.
January 08, 2022 at 01:59 AM
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